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Hello everyone!!

So as some of you probably already know we have launched our Indiegogo a little more than one week ago.
Now the thing is that the big story about the Indiegogo is to sale our figurine, but we are also offering extras such as mugs, pillows and bags.
(Because we are mainly using the Indiegogo to have a certain timeframe for the first badge of orders.)

And here comes my question:
I noticed that a lot of people actually like the mugs, bags, etc, but they don't know that you can get them without having to purchase a figurine.
I have worked on the perks a lot to make this all easier to understand, (for instance I have created a perk that combines mug and bag and includes shipping, because some people commented on that), but perhaps there is something I do not see that I could do to make this part even easier to understand.


Is there somebody around here who would like to take a look and give me some input/ feedback? :)
Here is the link to the campaign: igg.me/at/minotauragirl

BTW, for a quick overview.
This is the figurine:          And these are the extras that I was talking about:
 
 
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I have checked the campaign, and while all the info is clear syntax-wise (what it says), it might not be so much semantics-wise (how it is said). The video atop shows no visual separation between figurine and extras, so I can understand the confusion of the potential buyer, as the reminder about the fact that items can be purchased separatedly is only in text form quite below the video.

I wouldn't add much to the campaign the way it is now, but I do would rearrange elements (paragraphs, images, font color for standout captions) so it is clear from the right start that you can buy either figurine or extras or both.

The figurine looks awesome and highly attractive (snapshots may be shown as camera pans from feet to head), some pictures with a human hand nearby for comparison purposes would work good for future boosting the campaign. Also the actual use of extras in everyday situations (for example, mug held by someone) would create empathy with the viewer.

I hope this helps. The quality and good work in the items are beyond discussion.